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Sponsored by: Constance La France Contest~ Name Writing Challenge - O Words

 Written 7/27/2023
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"Limbs undresses as their garments lace the ground." Quote by poet October scarlet and gold stillness drawn kindle in treetops and lace on the lawn. Butterflies flutter amid garden's plants and fruit grown fall, flowing foraging ants. Under tree's umbra playful leaves are blown, nymph in a world of magic, others shown. It's so perfect, calm, and tranquil haven; even for wakeful wide-winged black raven. Ignited colors bring this October orchid sky turns distant wan and sober.

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Date: 7/29/2023 7:39:00 AM
Very creative and beautiful, congratulations:)
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Date: 7/29/2023 3:16:00 AM
A lovely poem Eve and your quote was most admirable too. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/29/2023 12:38:00 AM
A very powerful depiction of October. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/28/2023 7:56:00 PM
Eve, your words distill the colorful joy of a beautiful October day! So lovely. Your images are so original! Congratulations on your first place win dear friend! Blessings! So wonderful to see this treasury of beautiful images on the winners list!
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Date: 7/28/2023 6:17:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Eve! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/27/2023 2:54:00 PM
Much enjoyed this colorful celebration of October, Eve. Fall is indeed a tranquil season as you say--especially after a hot summer.
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