Oceans of Gold

Divine transition,
From treacherous sapphire surfs;
Waves of golden grace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Knop Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 2:47 PM
waves of golden grace---great write, Raúl! Gracias por tus comentarios!---Gert
Kendrick Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 4:35 AM
Good write about the lastest picture...Sara
Milgate Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 10:10 PM
Thank you. Enjoyed reading your work and will continue to. Also so interesting to read creative and different works on your picture. Wonderful idea. Thank you so much
Mckenzie Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 6:18 PM
Raul~ You are the master of Haiku's what a beautiful piece this is so well done! A pleasure to read! Laura :)
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April 24, 2010 at 4:56 PM
What an inspirational poem. Good use of alliteration for a creative perspective. I really like this one. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Karen
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April 24, 2010 at 1:57 PM
Exquisite Haiku, Raul!! Thanks for the honor....thanks for stimulating our hearts and minds, and also for your kind, encouraging comments...Peace, Audrey
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