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Oceans of Gold

Divine transition, From treacherous sapphire surfs; Waves of golden grace.

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/4/2010 2:47:00 PM

waves of golden grace---great write, Raúl! Gracias por tus comentarios!---Gert

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/25/2010 4:35:00 AM

Good write about the lastest picture...Sara

Linda Milgate

Date: 4/24/2010 10:10:00 PM

Thank you. Enjoyed reading your work and will continue to. Also so interesting to read creative and different works on your picture. Wonderful idea. Thank you so much

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 4/24/2010 6:18:00 PM

Raul~ You are the master of Haiku's what a beautiful piece this is so well done! A pleasure to read! Laura :)

Date: 4/24/2010 4:56:00 PM

What an inspirational poem. Good use of alliteration for a creative perspective. I really like this one. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Karen

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/24/2010 1:57:00 PM

Exquisite Haiku, Raul!! Thanks for the honor....thanks for stimulating our hearts and minds, and also for your kind, encouraging comments...Peace, Audrey