Oceans Apart

separating seas you have sailed to distant shores - your dawn is my dusk
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 3:14 AM
Brilliant! Perfect meter, and what a wonderful final line. BRAVO David!! Best wishes, Keith
De La Croes Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 3:54 AM
Thanks, Keith. I appreciate your comment, David
Nguyen Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 2:52 AM
What a tersely expressed insight in the form of poetry! This is very memorable....Ngoc.
De La Croes Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 2:56 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Ngoc. Best wishes, David
Mannan Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 1:46 AM
So beautiful and deep.
De La Croes Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 1:58 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Tahera. I appreciate it. Have a great day! David
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