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Oceans Apart

separating seas you have sailed to distant shores - your dawn is my dusk

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/12/2013 3:14:00 AM

Brilliant! Perfect meter, and what a wonderful final line. BRAVO David!! Best wishes, Keith

David De La Croes
Date: 4/12/2013 3:54:00 AM

Thanks, Keith. I appreciate your comment, David

Ngoc Nguyen

Date: 4/12/2013 2:52:00 AM

What a tersely expressed insight in the form of poetry! This is very memorable....Ngoc.

David De La Croes
Date: 4/12/2013 2:56:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Ngoc. Best wishes, David

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/12/2013 1:46:00 AM

So beautiful and deep.

David De La Croes
Date: 4/12/2013 1:58:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Tahera. I appreciate it. Have a great day! David