Cory Long Poet Rhyme

Oceans

Looking beyond what the eye sees.
Water splashing to your knees.
Hearing sounds of peacefulness.
Watching a deep blue mystery of excitement.
Another world lies below, the waves of the ocean.
holding tightly to life and the secrets it hides.
Wondering what the ocean would say?
If the ocean could talk today.
Will the ocean ever show?
Exactly what the ocean knows?

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Don Johnson May 23, 2011 at 5:47 PM water speaks n waves they lap frothing forming to attack ... great verse babe ...Don

Kacey Greenlee May 20, 2011 at 6:17 PM Really enjoyed this poem Cory.And thanks again for your wonderful comment on my animal contest win...Sincerely,Kacey

Matt Hunt May 20, 2011 at 4:27 PM Great expressive images on the ocean Corey:) R.M.

Dr.Ram Mehta May 20, 2011 at 9:12 AM Nice expressions on oceans , cory

Carol Sunshine Brown May 20, 2011 at 7:02 AM What a beautiful morning. The sun is finally shining, the birds are singing, and I am sharing my day with you reading your wonderful poetry. I hope you have a great weekend Cory. Love, Carol

Timothy Brumley May 20, 2011 at 6:45 AM Will man ever expose all the secrets of his heart? I suppose that the two would be a fair trade, don't you? I figure that the one is just as difficult as the other. For, only God truly knows them both, and only before God will they both be made known. Keep these poetic questions flowing as it's only through the asking that the answers will eventually sate the appetite of the poet.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 20, 2011 at 6:04 AM Many dark and deep secrets the ocean keeps cory and as lovely as it is it can be treacherous too.. such a beautiful and inspiring poem today my friend.. intense and thought provoking to its amazing wonder ..luv..happy weekend..