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Ocean-Ku Haiku

cold Pacific night
	two moons on mirror water
	wave-whisper song







	For Ocean-ku contest

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Poet Destroyer A

April 24, 2013 at 8:02 PM

Jack, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

Jack Jordan

April 24, 2013 at 8:23 PM

Thank you... And the same to you - congrats! Jack

Donna Jones

April 23, 2013 at 1:04 PM

Jack....this is gorgeous congratulations

Jack Jordan

April 23, 2013 at 3:33 PM

Thank you for the nice compliment... Jack

Debbie Guzzi

April 23, 2013 at 10:19 AM

Lovely imagery and transmitted feeling! Don't worry overly about the 5/7/5 factual. Most of the haiku is meant to be in the readers mind between the lines ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Jack Jordan

April 23, 2013 at 10:54 AM

Thanks for the comment and advice... Jack

Jack Jordan

April 23, 2013 at 9:19 AM

Thanks, Caleb! And the same to you... Jack

Painted Hunter

April 23, 2013 at 9:12 AM

Cool Jack! Congrats on the win!

Andrea Dietrich

April 13, 2013 at 11:28 PM

this is just beautiful!!

Donna Jones

April 13, 2013 at 10:11 PM

I am very impressed Jack....nice....

Jack Jordan

April 13, 2013 at 10:32 PM

Thanks! It was a wonderful experience. It's interesting to capture the moment 20+ years after the event... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

April 13, 2013 at 12:01 PM

I need a jacket all of a sudden... a nice xool breeze... love the passion from the ocean. Jack, I enjoyed stopping by to read your poem. Take care and have yourself a nice day. xox~LINDA

Jack Jordan

April 13, 2013 at 2:06 PM

Thank you Linda. Enjoy your weekend... Jack