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Ocean Whispers I sit on shore by windswept seas and feel the vibrant ocean breeze As waves cascade upon the sand in breathless wonders of this land. I bask in balmy salty air and feel the moistness in my hair. Luna begins her lofty climb, her silver beams are quite sublime. While in the distance boat lights glow and sparkle like a starlit show. Ocean magic enchants tonight to my romantic heart's delight. To skinny-dip, I soon undress in ocean swells with sweet caress Secluded on this private shore just waves and me that I adore. 8-9-2019 ~First Place~ Devotion to Ocean Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 6/20/2020 5:26:00 PM
Wow I like this poem And fave is goes Soft words Caressing
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/20/2020 5:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Gideon. I appreciate the beauty of the islands. Blessings xxoo
Date: 1/10/2020 12:03:00 PM
Au naturel with Mother nature... a little ocean dance under the moon and stars. What an enchanting piece, Connie - so glad you shared this. Congrats on your win, friend! Aloha ~ John
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Date: 1/9/2020 7:31:00 PM
simply beautiful...glad i got to read it again... congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Date: 1/9/2020 1:16:00 PM
Beautifully done!;) congratulations Connie on your win!;)
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Date: 1/9/2020 12:58:00 PM
You just made me smile with this delightful piece and its surprise ending! So well done - some wonderful unexpected rhymes! Congratulations my friend. Ho'omaika'i'ana - hope I got that right!
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Date: 1/9/2020 12:24:00 PM
awww how beautiful sweet lady, you never cease to amaze me. Congrats x:-)-luloo
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Date: 10/8/2019 12:55:00 AM
What a lovely piece of poetry! It seems I read such a good poem after a long time. Congrats.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 10/18/2019 5:43:00 PM
Thank you very much. It is nice to meet you. Aloha, Connie : )
Date: 9/13/2019 2:05:00 PM
I love the carefree nature of this beautiful piece of poetry... Congratulations on your first place win Connie!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/13/2019 6:18:00 PM
Thank you very much Kelly. The ocean brings me delight. : ) xxoo
Date: 9/12/2019 4:37:00 PM
'Connie, You nailed it. Excellent write! David'
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Date: 9/9/2019 6:39:00 PM
Hi Connie: Your poem reminds me of my body resting on the on the sand of alaina, North Africa. Great Write!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 9/9/2019 6:40:00 PM
on the sands of Tripoli, North Africa
Date: 9/9/2019 4:15:00 AM
ow great, I enjoyed; love it
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Date: 9/7/2019 11:18:00 AM
This is lovely. It;s how I feel about the sea, even down to the undressing - super.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/8/2019 12:03:00 AM
Thank you very much Peter. I've lived in the mountains with an ocean view for the past 40 years. It is only a short drive away. Aloha, Connie xxoo
Date: 9/5/2019 5:56:00 PM
I can't believe I missed commenting on this gem before, congrats on your win and also on top of the best new poems list - so well deserved you are an incredibly talented lady Connie:-)into my faves :-) hugs Jan xx
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/5/2019 6:53:00 PM
Thank you very much Jan. I am thrilled that members seem to like my little ocean poem so much. I truly appreciate your sweet comment and Fave. I have been super busy too and I am sure I may have missed some of yours. I am slowly catching up. I can see better today. I had my eye shot yesterday which was quite painful and knocked me out all day. Blessings, Connie xxoo
Date: 9/4/2019 5:27:00 PM
Amazing, I recently went to the Jersey Shore, and the ocean was just like this
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Date: 9/2/2019 8:47:00 PM
Top of the best 100. Fantastic!
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Date: 9/2/2019 1:19:00 PM
Hello Connie, this poem made me feel like i should be there. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 9/2/2019 7:55:00 AM
This one is the first in the Best 100 Poems and it truly deserves the win. Beautifully written :)
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Date: 9/2/2019 5:38:00 AM
Was that you Connie! *smiles Such the convincing write dear poet...you reeled me in dear poet, i felt the breeze...ty, have a wonderful week....much love, james
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James Peranteau
Date: 9/2/2019 5:39:00 AM
...ps....congrats
Date: 9/2/2019 3:15:00 AM
Congratulations Connie this is a wonderful poem so beautifully written. When reading it I’m on that beach thank you.
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Date: 9/1/2019 9:30:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem, Connie. Congrats on your win and well deserved.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/1/2019 9:31:00 PM
Thank you very much Francis. : )
Date: 9/1/2019 9:20:00 PM
What a beautiful poem Connie. Congrats on the very deserving win! Susan
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/1/2019 9:32:00 PM
Thank you Susan. It is very nice to meet you. Aloha, Connie : )
Date: 9/1/2019 8:46:00 PM
This Minnesotan only has these lovely nights in my dreams. :/ :) But be careful of them sparkling boats with telescopes. :) <3
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/1/2019 9:55:00 PM
Very true, one has to be aware of that. Not many swim at night because of the fear of sharks. Thank you Leslie. I love your kitty icon. : )
Date: 9/1/2019 8:02:00 PM
Beautiful Connie. I can feel and see your lovely imagery. A well deserved number one.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/1/2019 10:02:00 PM
I think the coolness of the ocean lures people in with this hot weather Sandra. I am very pleased you liked it. Thank you very much my friend. : ) xxoo
Date: 9/1/2019 7:45:00 PM
What a beautiful scene you have created here Connie, I can see why its number 1. Congratulations my dear friend....Maria Hugs
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/1/2019 10:15:00 PM
I appreciate that Maria. Thank you very much. I am surprised it reached the top of the list and feel honored. xxoo : )
Date: 9/1/2019 7:25:00 PM
Congratulations for being number 1 on the best new poem list :)
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