Ocean Waves Haiku

Crashing waves on beach
Empowering mind and soul
Cleanse with ebb and flow

27th January 2019

SECOND PLACE
Contest: Ocean Waves Haiku
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

HONOURABLE MENTION
Contest PREMIERE CONTEST NO 200,HAIKU(traditional or otherwise)or 
TANKA(inc cinqku,cinquain or lanterne | 
Sponsor: Brian Strand
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Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 6:39 PM
beautiful message in your Ku. Congrats to you.
Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 8:05 AM
- A lovely haiku, Ann :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gilmour Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 8:38 AM
So glad you liked it Anne-Lise, and many thanks for your congrats and hugs. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Gauthier Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:46 PM
Lovely, Ann. A lovely introspective take.
Gilmour Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 5:35 AM
Many thanks Line for your lovely comments. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Kitchin Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:35 PM
Ann, lovely Haiku, the ocean is very cleaning on many levels, congratulations on your winning placement!
Gilmour Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 5:34 AM
Thank you so much Tania for my 2nd placement in your competition. The sea/ocean is my favourite place to be, so I enjoyed entering your contest Tania. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Cunningham Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 12:46 AM
Lovely image Ann, there is no better place to be and it is so theraputic listening to the sound of the water. Good luck. Tom.
Gilmour Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 1:50 AM
Many thanks for your lovely comment Tom, yes I walk along the prom every day if I can and feel so much better for it. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Kinch  Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 11:43 AM
Love this haiku Ann. Watching the waves really does empower the mind and soul.
Gilmour Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 2:32 PM
Hi Elizabeth, yes my soul suffers if I'm away from the sea for too long. The feeling I get when I walk by the sea is quite spiritual and lifts me if I feel down. I could never live anywhere else now. Hope your day was good. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Sands Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 5:35 AM
This is so nice and inspiring! Thanks for sharing :)
Gilmour Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 5:57 AM
Thank you so much Heidi I always appreciate your comments. I am drawn to the sea and when I go inland I feel like a fish out of water- I am a Piscean so that explains a lot, haha. However, I am lucky to live next to the sea so I am able to enjoy it each day and I never tire of its ever changing beauty. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
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