Ocean Waves

ocean waves swelling gray water touches gray sky water spouts come_go
Sponsor: Heather Ober Contest:Ocean-ku Written this Thirteenth day of April 2013

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Date: 10/21/2013 7:47:00 PM
Very pretty well expressed enjoy it really, I love the ocean and sea. thanks for sharing it with me. also thanks for your comments. cheri
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Date: 4/21/2013 4:56:00 PM
lovely haiku, my friend
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Date: 4/15/2013 3:23:00 PM
You go Sara! That's a winner!
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Date: 4/14/2013 12:46:00 PM
Beautifully done!!! I love water spouts. Especially when I'm not near one. :)
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Date: 4/14/2013 9:49:00 AM
Sara; This is Amazing, the way you made the swelling waves touch the gray sky. you know sometime ago I wrote a poem ( Ocean Waves ), but mine is longer and very different. I'll see if I can find it. Good luck in the contest....... Lucilla
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Date: 4/13/2013 10:25:00 PM
Beautiful Sara
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Date: 4/13/2013 1:58:00 PM
This presents a nice image, I really enjoyed reading this amazing write this afternoon! What a delightful piece, such a wonderful poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 4/13/2013 1:57:00 PM
It is like plunging into the ocean! Wonderful!
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Date: 4/13/2013 1:17:00 PM
Sara... This is lovely... Right there My friend... Good luck~A.O
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Date: 4/13/2013 1:01:00 PM
lovely haiku, Sara
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Date: 4/13/2013 12:11:00 PM
Sara, everywhere I go here I see ocean-ku's...LOL..i love them all. good luck in the contest. Enjoyed stopping by to read your poem. Take care and have yourself a nice day. xox~LINDA
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Date: 4/13/2013 9:16:00 AM
- A beautiful picture / poem Sara. - Good luck in the contest! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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