Ocean Waves

in rhythmic motion waves tango with the shore, a never ending dance - 1-27-19 Ocean Waves Haiku Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/31/2019 12:23:00 PM

Your so right Joseph it is like a never ending dance as the waves lap against the shore. So explicitly explained in this wonderfully written Haiku! Congratulations on your win. Poetry Hugs, Jennifer.

Susan Jeavons

Date: 1/31/2019 11:41:00 AM

Lovely Haiku Joseph. I like the image of the water and the shore dancing. Blessings, Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2019 6:33:00 PM

lovely personification, my friend. Congrats on the win.

Carole Duet

Date: 1/29/2019 7:14:00 PM

Beautiful and true, Joseph.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/29/2019 9:43:00 AM

Absolutely gorgeous haiku joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/29/2019 7:58:00 AM

- I'm back with congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/28/2019 11:12:00 PM

Everything about this whispers- winner!! I knew it the moment I read it. Congratulations Joseph!! :) Brandy

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/28/2019 9:56:00 PM

A beautiful rhythm! Congrats, Joseph!

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/28/2019 9:29:00 PM

Hi Joseph, This is lovely. Nice flow as well. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/28/2019 8:02:00 PM

Love it! Congrats on your win, Joseph! :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/28/2019 7:53:00 PM

Lovely, Joseph. Congrats on your top win.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/28/2019 7:19:00 PM

Awesome imagery Joe, congratulations on your 1st winning placement in the contest!

Joseph May
Date: 1/29/2019 8:06:00 AM

Thank you for my placement Tania..

Wendy Watson

Date: 1/28/2019 5:41:00 AM

I really love this imagery and rhythmic flow, Joseph. One of the best I have read.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/28/2019 4:30:00 AM

- An eternal dance ... a lovely description, Joseph :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/28/2019 12:40:00 AM

No better place to be than be by the shore Joseph, so theraputic. Great haiku. Good luck. Tom.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/27/2019 10:41:00 PM

Yes!! And the melody is mesmerizing, simply breathtaking. I love everything about the waters touch. You have created a masterpiece. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. A favorite for me. :) Brandy