Ocean Waves

in rhythmic motion
 waves tango with the shore, a
 never ending dance
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 1-27-19
Ocean Waves Haiku Contest
 Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Jennifer Proxenos

January 31, 2019 at 12:23 PM

Your so right Joseph it is like a never ending dance as the waves lap against the shore. So explicitly explained in this wonderfully written Haiku! Congratulations on your win. Poetry Hugs, Jennifer.

Susan Jeavons

January 31, 2019 at 11:41 AM

Lovely Haiku Joseph. I like the image of the water and the shore dancing. Blessings, Susan

Andrea Dietrich

January 30, 2019 at 6:33 PM

lovely personification, my friend. Congrats on the win.

Carole Duet

January 29, 2019 at 7:14 PM

Beautiful and true, Joseph.

Jan Allison

January 29, 2019 at 9:43 AM

Absolutely gorgeous haiku joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 29, 2019 at 7:58 AM

- I'm back with congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brandy Nicole

January 28, 2019 at 11:12 PM

Everything about this whispers- winner!! I knew it the moment I read it. Congratulations Joseph!! :) Brandy

Kim Rodrigues

January 28, 2019 at 9:56 PM

A beautiful rhythm! Congrats, Joseph!

Alexis Y.

January 28, 2019 at 9:29 PM

Hi Joseph, This is lovely. Nice flow as well. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Laura Leiser

January 28, 2019 at 8:02 PM

Love it! Congrats on your win, Joseph! :)

Line Gauthier

January 28, 2019 at 7:53 PM

Lovely, Joseph. Congrats on your top win.

Tania Kitchin

January 28, 2019 at 7:19 PM

Awesome imagery Joe, congratulations on your 1st winning placement in the contest!

Joseph May

January 29, 2019 at 8:06 AM

Thank you for my placement Tania..

Wendy Watson

January 28, 2019 at 5:41 AM

I really love this imagery and rhythmic flow, Joseph. One of the best I have read.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 28, 2019 at 4:30 AM

- An eternal dance ... a lovely description, Joseph :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

January 28, 2019 at 12:40 AM

No better place to be than be by the shore Joseph, so theraputic. Great haiku. Good luck. Tom.

Brandy Nicole

January 27, 2019 at 10:41 PM

Yes!! And the melody is mesmerizing, simply breathtaking. I love everything about the waters touch. You have created a masterpiece. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. A favorite for me. :) Brandy

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