Ocean Waves

Restless Soul of Sea
somersaulting waves rupture
Tsunami drowns Love. 





Dated 27th January 2019

Contest - Ocean Waves Haiku
Sponsor - Tania Kitchin
Syllable - 5 7 5 on poetrysoup syllable counter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 6:38 PM
love all that personification! congrats for the win.
Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 8:04 AM
- I'm back with congratulations, Debjani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:48 PM
Congrats on your win, Debjani.
Kitchin Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:31 PM
Lovely haiku with great imagery of rough ocean waves building to a Tsunami, congratulations on your winning placement!
Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 4:28 AM
- Always restless, Debjani :) - Lovely haiku - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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