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~1st Place~
Contest: Haiku - Theme Sea - Ocean
Sponsor: Mick Talbot
Judged: 05/11/2018

 

For The Contest, "Your Best Haiku Ever"

Sponsor, Andrea Dietrich

Ocean Waves

waves come crashing in topple castles made of sand ... what will future bring
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 9:08 PM
Ditto what I said in 2019. My comment from then is right beneath this one!
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 6:48 PM
Nice one, Sandra. Congrats for your win.
Kitchin Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:50 PM
Nice one Sandra, so many sand castle masterpieces washed away! Congratulations on your winning placement!
Gauthier Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:36 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra.
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 3:02 PM
Congrats on a great win, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 7:02 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea! Hugs, Sandra
Wolf Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 11:12 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra! :) gw
Haight Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Thank you, Gershon! Sandra
Allison Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 4:16 PM
Very nice, Sandra! Congrats!
Haight Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Thank you so much, Kim! Hugs, Sandra :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 2:41 PM
Lovely piece Sandra! Congratulations on your win :) xomo!
Haight Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Thank you very much, Maureen! Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 2:32 PM
Congratulations on your great first place win, Sandra, the imagery is fabulous... eve
Haight Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:19 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, for stopping by with your congrats and uplifting comment! Hugs, Sandra :)
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 8:24 AM
- Congratulations on your great first place in the contest, Sandra :) - Happy Weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:19 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise! Much appreciated. You have a wonderful weekend too! Hugs, Sandra :)
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 11:21 PM
Well done, Sandra. Congrats on your top win.
Haight Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:18 PM
Thank you, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Talbot Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 11:14 PM
What will the future bring? The way things are nothing good I fear! Great haiku Sandra, congratulations on your win.
Haight Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:18 PM
A big question for sure, Mick. Thanks for the great contest and for my placement! Sandra :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 5:41 PM
Do you remember questionku, Sandra? This could have been made into one of those for that question on the end!! I hope we get to see the winners of this contest soon.
Haight Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:17 PM
Yes, I do remember that, Andrea. Thanks for stopping by. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 4:51 PM
Sweet, Sandra. Beautiful imagery. I even imagined a sunset - that's the beauty of these short Japanese forms.
Haight Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:16 PM
Thank you very much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Turner Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 9:13 AM
Yes Mrs Sandra, life is a beach:) Happy mother's day!
Haight Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:16 PM
Yes, indeed, Daniel! Thank you! Sandra
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 8:43 AM
Ooh I like this :)
Haight Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:15 PM
Thanks, Maureen! Hugs, Sandra
Sands Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 6:24 AM
Well written haiku Sandra. I can see it and feel it :)
Haight Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:15 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi, for your positive comment. Hugs, Sandra
Cunningham Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 5:48 AM
This could easily relate to the state of the world now Sandra.We need to strengthen our castles. Good luck. Tom.
Haight Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:14 PM
Yes, indeed, Tom. Thanks for the visit and GL wishes! Sandra
Allison Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 3:30 AM
i used to love building sandcastles so relate to this in many ways - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Thanks, Jan! Sandcastles were fun for me too! Hugs, Sandra
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