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Ocean Serenity

Sitting on a blanket watching ocean waves, Pleasantly drunk while the sun warmed our faces. Toes touching, shoulders touching , lips touching, Fingers entwine as heartbeat races. All serious thoughts banished from our minds Leaving tender serenity that love encases.

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 1/4/2011 4:51:00 PM

From an old sailor, this one paints a pretty picture. Vince

Carlus Wilmot

Date: 5/3/2010 8:39:00 AM

imagery is great, last line is beautiful. Thanks for stopping by. check my blog if you have time some day... www.midnightriderbk-poetry.blogspot.com

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/3/2010 7:27:00 AM

Dear Francine, I wish to Welcome YOU to the Soup Family YOU are a very Talented addition to the site I see YOUR Heart of LOVE in this awesome "Free Verse" Poetry I shall be reading more of YOU , YOUR Liege ALWAYS... HG

Travis Tapley

Date: 4/28/2010 6:53:00 PM

What is it about the ocean that makes love even more grand? I love the last line in this poem. I also love the thoughts that have been banished from the minds. The joy of being together as one. Really wonderful poem!