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Ocean Potion

Ocean potion healing elixir weightless floating free Unlinked From chains of heavy burden where One can finally breath Out the old and in the new rejuvenate the mind cleansing body , close your eyes , pretend that you are blind . Just Listen , smell and feel it’s movement caressing rhythmic motions cradles with a mother’s touch , tender loves devotion Wind sings and with it brings cool breath upon the face lullaby waves, in secret bays pave the way to her embrace Hypnotic temptress casts her spells docile waves of turquoise swell Time stands still induced in coma take in salty airs aroma Sleeping in a wake full state lucid dreaming devoid of fate As light as nothing, unconstrained Letting go colossal pain Fresh breeze comes to tease but just a taste before it leaves it toys , it plays in child like ways The sun beats down it’s burning rays performs its graceful ballet dance as light shines off glass waves Bewitching and seductive to all that it enslaved secret whispers in silent caves Endless depth shroud watery graves Of those who lost their lives long ago Pirates ,God’s and tales of hero’s Placid barbarity rules this place But does it with poetic grace Cleansed from sins of humanity Exempt from responsibility A spiritual experience sets the body free Awakened and enlightened Within the Sacred sea

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Date: 1/25/2020 7:27:00 PM
Boo! Love this EP... I am waiting for your next masterpiece.... please keep writing you.. Bestest DAMO
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 4/28/2020 3:30:00 AM
Thanks Damo :-) x
Date: 10/7/2019 7:39:00 AM
Stunning poem Elaine full of identifiable images wrapped in a soggy mind ("sleeping in a wake full state"). I will definately be back for more reads of your work. Have a great day.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 10/10/2019 8:35:00 AM
Thank you so much Phil :-) x
Date: 9/26/2019 8:38:00 AM
Aaah I feel relaxed reading this beautiful piece.
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/26/2019 10:09:00 AM
Happy to have helped relax you :-) Thank you Richard x
Date: 9/25/2019 2:53:00 PM
such a lovely poem with great imagery... loved it..
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/26/2019 5:05:00 AM
Thank you so much :-) x
Date: 9/22/2019 2:09:00 AM
I love the ocean and your poem. Both are true blessings from above. Thank you for such a beautiful poem. God bless you
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/22/2019 2:35:00 AM
You’re very welcome Regina and thank you for your lovely words. :-) x
Date: 9/21/2019 7:32:00 PM
I really love the many ways you described the ocean. I agree with Connie down here: absolutely gorgeous!
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/22/2019 2:36:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, so glad you enjoyed it :-) x
Date: 9/21/2019 2:27:00 PM
This is absolutely gorgeous Elaine! I too am drawn to the healing ocean's potion. This tribute is so outstanding! Aloha, Connie : ) xxoo
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Elaine Perrin
Date: 9/21/2019 4:25:00 PM
Thank you so much Connie I’m so happy it moved you :-) xx

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