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Contest: Two Seven Four Poetry Contest, sponsored by Charles Messina

Ocean Day - TSF

Ocean
Salty
Fresh air
Sandy
Foamy
Sea surf
Pleasures

Starfish
Seashells
Urchins
Sea glass
Beach rocks
Seaweed
Treasures

Rocky
Climbing
Tanning
Resting
Reading
Surfing
Beach play

Osprey
Heron
Seagull
Piper
Egret
Shorebirds 
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Miller Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 1:44 AM
Vey nicely done, congratulations
Kitchin Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 3:23 AM
Terry, thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 3:13 PM
Back with congrats, sweetie
Kitchin Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 3:23 AM
Andrea, thank you.
Messina Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 3:24 AM
Tania, your beachy write is wonderful, makes me want to go catch some rays! Congratulations on your placement and thanks for entering my contest! Charlie :)
Kitchin Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 3:23 AM
Charlie, thank you and thank you for my placement.
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 8:52 AM
Love your style in how you arranged your beach words, Tania
Kitchin Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 5:03 AM
Andrea, thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 1:57 AM
Dear Tania. your contest entry is wonderful. It's beyond me so far. But your poem is sublime. Wish you a firs placement.
Kitchin Avatar
August 27, 2025 at 3:39 AM
Victor, thank you.
Allison Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 2:23 AM
How lovely and descriptive , I must check out this contest Tania! been too busy on holiday to log on to soup and now too busy now we are home lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 3:36 AM
Jan, thank you. It is a fun contest.
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