Ocean Blue

I pause to the moon
Truly my heart goes out to you
My hearts home, your arms
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horsman Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 11:05 PM
beautiful Edward, such profoundness. Harry
Smith Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 3:20 PM
Wonderful poetry I just wrote one about the ocean so your title caught my eye:), I really enjoyed reading your poetry today and I'm looking forward to reading more. Take care of yourself. Dana'lynn
Bloomsfield Avatar
March 27, 2011 at 10:16 PM
Wow,beautiful Eddie,it is so nice to see you posting here once again,i love all 3 lines,can' t pick a favourite. .lovely!
Devonshire Avatar
March 27, 2011 at 11:29 AM
My heart feels homeless, Edward, but perhaps if I look to the moon and search the sea, I'll find my way into a special man's arms. Nice to see you posting again. Best wishes, carolyn
Mehta Avatar
March 27, 2011 at 9:44 AM
Very sensual write, with pleasing images, Edward
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