Ocean

Waves carry away sand
but a few grains left behind...
memories in my mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 4:46 PM
Afroze, had this been for the contest? I don't see any congrats here, but I have an idea what may have happened. I did not notice this the first time I saw it, but you have repeated "a few" in line two, and if not for that, I think it could have been a winning ocean haiku,
Ali Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 7:49 PM
Oops yes that was by mistake. Didn't check. Thanks Andrea for letting me know.
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 11:59 PM
this is a really lovely haiku for the contest. Sorry you missed out on my faves list, my friend! Keep the title of your poem I faved in your mind in case I open up that contest again.
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