Ocean

Ocean Waves of great might Enhanced wet tears Great liquid of delight Mastery of this water Unheard of Russell Sivey Form Vignette

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Jack Horne

Date: 11/25/2012 7:15:00 AM

another beautiful write

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/25/2012 4:18:00 AM

Great comparison..Enjoyed reading this morning..Your visits to my work are greatly appreciated..Thanks for stopping by..Your time spent there is valued...Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2012 8:39:00 AM

that's a cool line, Russell: enhanced wet tears! You have certainly defined the ocean!

Cory Long

Date: 11/24/2012 6:52:00 AM

I like the picture you paint with your words.. I love the ocean. Have a great day :) cory