Ocean

Ocean Waves of great might Enhanced wet tears Great liquid of delight Mastery of this water Unheard of
Russell Sivey Form Vignette
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horne Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 7:15 AM
another beautiful write
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November 25, 2012 at 4:18 AM
Great comparison..Enjoyed reading this morning..Your visits to my work are greatly appreciated..Thanks for stopping by..Your time spent there is valued...Sara
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 8:39 AM
that's a cool line, Russell: enhanced wet tears! You have certainly defined the ocean!
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November 24, 2012 at 6:52 AM
I like the picture you paint with your words.. I love the ocean. Have a great day :) cory
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