Notes About The Poem

Written July 23, 2026
For The Contest, “Nature Haiku – Ocean, Lake or River”
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin ~ 3rd Place

ocean

racing toward shore
frothy waves can roll for days-
searching for a break
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 7:13 PM
Nice word play and little video! Congrats 👍
Kitchin Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 2:55 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful ocean haiku. Love the pic too but could not see that during judging.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 10:15 PM
Love the video, waves searching for a break is an wonderful way to portray it.
Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 5:15 PM
I like your action picture. The haiku is awesome. Sara K.
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