Ocean

a host of sea stars
           living mosaic wonder
                            ocean’s galaxy 





Written on 4/16/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Orozco Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 4:06 PM
Well done! I love the ocean.
Leiser Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 4:46 PM
I do, too! Thanks for commenting, Edward! :)
Neumann Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 1:21 AM
Beautiful. And I am facing two light houses this very moment. Many wishes, Kai
Breidenthal Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 4:25 AM
Beautiful and precious write. Honors nature in its times of wonder and mystery beyond us. Thanks for sharing!×D -JWE
Breidenthal Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 4:25 AM
Congrats on your win too. Sweet!
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 3:15 PM
as Maureen said, this is gorgeous. and CONGRATS
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 1:26 PM
Gorgeous. xo
Gauthier Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 10:04 PM
Back with well deserved congrats on your podium finish, Laura.
Wolf Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 5:15 PM
Such a fresh analogy and expansive imagery. Like it a lot!! Congrats on your win., Laura! :)
Leiser Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 7:46 PM
Thank you, Gershon :)
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 2:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 2st place in the haiku contest, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 7:46 PM
Thank you, Nee-Lise :)
Gentry Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 12:46 PM
My kind of haiku. Congratulations on your win.
Leiser Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 7:46 PM
Thank you, Susan :)
Malik Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 10:06 AM
Magical <3
Leiser Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 7:45 PM
Thank you, Yazmin :)
Michael Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 4:58 AM
Lovely imagery...
Leiser Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 7:45 PM
Thank you, Arturo :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 1:33 AM
Lovely, Laura. Love it.
Leiser Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 7:44 PM
Thanks, as always, Line :)
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