Obstacles

A hurdle i can take,
or even an elephant too.
but this time its too much,
obstacles too big,
more like an avalance has fallen right at my feet.
i try to jump in and make my way across,
but frozen stuck in this tundra,
no way out and cant turn back.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 7, 2010 at 4:54 AM
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