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06/ 12/ 2026

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

OBSESSIVE

     Yes ! I’m really obsessive
     rather, also too possessive ,
     mostly acting impulsive—
     brain being too much sensitive 
                                             and mind becoming just hollow .                        

     My sweet heart is my obsession
       I can't control my emotion
      igniting always my passion.
      I'm always in tension ,
                                             when my mind may outburst and blow.

    A psychological defect !
   Even simply can't tolerate 
    to see a male associate
    or normal male friend to accept :
                                                 Tough mental state of Othello

   At last appeared that event
    leaving me only to lament.
    I murdered her and will repent -
   as I found, she was innocent.
                                                       Me ! A Mischievous fellow !
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Rodrigues Avatar
June 12, 2026 at 3:28 PM
Nice monorhyme!
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