Mick Talbot Poet Rhyme

Obsessed

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Reach I try, but the sky so high.
Obsessed, I am, I don’t deny.
Surface rough, or surface flat,
Maybe neither, cant be exact.
Joke, I can, you need not laugh
Luxury wow I now have a bath
Paint it is my life its what I do
Stubborn sometimes aren’t you
Praise is earned not just given
Craving peace I’ve always striven
Muse on a life better for us all
Profound sure but aren’t we all
Art is  what I did, failing sight
Now poetry my joyous plight

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Tom Cunningham March 4, 2018 at 10:42 AM And now you paint with words. Well done Mick. Mick Talbot March 4, 2018 at 11:54 AM Tom, Thank you, loving just as much!... Mick

Sanket Jain March 4, 2018 at 8:38 AM Well, first of all thank you for your valuable time and comments on Pari Style. The poem begins beautifully. Though negative, I liked the idea. Many lines have Inversion which is a powerful rhetorical device. Moved by stable imagery of your poem. Keep up. Poetry is language-most distilled and powerful. Yours is one of them. Be in touch & keep reviewing Pari Style Poems. Mick Talbot March 4, 2018 at 9:11 AM Sanket, Many thanks for your compliments. I sure will keep in touch, thanks again... Mick