Obsessed

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Reach I try, but the sky so high. Obsessed, I am, I don’t deny. Surface rough, or surface flat, Maybe neither, cant be exact. Joke, I can, you need not laugh Luxury wow I now have a bath Paint it is my life its what I do Stubborn sometimes aren’t you Praise is earned not just given Craving peace I’ve always striven Muse on a life better for us all Profound sure but aren’t we all Art is what I did, failing sight Now poetry my joyous plight ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/4/2018 10:42:00 AM

And now you paint with words. Well done Mick.

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/4/2018 11:54:00 AM

Tom, Thank you, loving just as much!... Mick

Sanket Jain

Date: 3/4/2018 8:38:00 AM

Well, first of all thank you for your valuable time and comments on Pari Style. The poem begins beautifully. Though negative, I liked the idea. Many lines have Inversion which is a powerful rhetorical device. Moved by stable imagery of your poem. Keep up. Poetry is language-most distilled and powerful. Yours is one of them. Be in touch & keep reviewing Pari Style Poems.

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/4/2018 9:11:00 AM

Sanket, Many thanks for your compliments. I sure will keep in touch, thanks again... Mick