Observer

The moon watched over the park with a star by its side A tint of gold reflected from trees where things can hide The park was empty and quiet, with frozen ground, no snow Just a place to discover things, a welcoming place to go The leaves from fall remained along the path to walk where you may just want to get away and not have to talk The skies were friendly, where the moon shared its space Along with the star, smiles glowed from its shining face It lit the sky with inspiration, observing from above One can only believe, it was created from true love Heidi Sands 1/10/25 (C)opyright

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Joe Maverick

Date: 1/23/2025 11:41:00 PM

A truly glowing write of the night Heidi Reading was a true delight.' All the best.'

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/24/2025 5:25:00 AM

Thank you Joe. I am happy to hear that. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Michael Tor

Date: 1/13/2025 10:30:00 AM

It was created from true love Heidi this is so beautiful to read and savor. Our creator is great. Love your message in this one Dear, really enjoyed reading... Hugs...

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/24/2025 5:19:00 AM

Hi Michael. I missed your comment earlier. Thank you for your kind appreciation. I hope you have a nice day :)

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 1/12/2025 5:51:00 AM

Beautiful poem Heidi. I like the solitude in this poem because I tend to be a loner. The end is great-giving dues to the Creator

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/12/2025 9:06:00 AM

Thank you Oliver. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/11/2025 9:25:00 PM

That first line is so resonant and redolent of serenity and peace, setting the tone for a majestic write. I am faving this one, Heidi. Thanks for sharing. :) Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/12/2025 5:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Gershon. I am happy tp see your comment and I appreciate the Fave too. I hope you have a nice day :)

Tom Woody

Date: 1/11/2025 7:36:00 AM

Gotta love that last line. To imagine blind evolution could be responsible for all we see around us is sci-fi at its worst. The Creator rightly deserves credit for His creation - Revelation 4:11

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/11/2025 7:44:00 AM

Definetly not Science Fiction Tom. The creator has granted us all of this to be grateful for daily...with love. Thank you :)

JCB Brul

Date: 1/11/2025 7:32:00 AM

I love the quiet park with the moon watching. I can vividly imagine serenity. Thank you Heidi for sharing this beautiful creation. Stay creative.^___^ JCB

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/11/2025 7:42:00 AM

Thank you very much JCB . It was a beautiful sight. I appreciate your support. Have a nice day :)

Ink Empress

Date: 1/11/2025 7:09:00 AM

So descriptive and beautiful, love so many lines in this especially how youv written " The skies were friendly, where the moon shared its space Along with the star, smiles glowed from its shining face" such sublime rhymes and exquisite imagery and metaphors so well delivered dear heidi! Pleasure reading this gem! Hope 2025 treats you well: sending you light always

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/11/2025 7:16:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and very kind comment. I hope 2025 is a great year for you. Best wishes ! :)