Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Observer

The moon watched over the park with a star by its side
A tint of gold reflected from trees where things can hide
The park was empty and quiet, with frozen ground, no snow
Just a place to discover things, a welcoming place to go
The leaves from fall remained along the path to walk
where you may just want to get away and not have to talk
The skies were friendly, where the moon shared its space
Along with the star, smiles glowed from its shining face
It lit the sky with inspiration, observing from above
One can only believe, it was created from true love

Heidi Sands

1/10/25

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Joe Maverick January 23, 2025 at 11:41 PM A truly glowing write of the night Heidi Reading was a true delight.' All the best.' Heidi Sands January 24, 2025 at 5:25 AM Thank you Joe. I am happy to hear that. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Michael Tor January 13, 2025 at 10:30 AM It was created from true love Heidi this is so beautiful to read and savor. Our creator is great. Love your message in this one Dear, really enjoyed reading... Hugs... Heidi Sands January 24, 2025 at 5:19 AM Hi Michael. I missed your comment earlier. Thank you for your kind appreciation. I hope you have a nice day :)

Oliver Mckeithan January 12, 2025 at 5:51 AM Beautiful poem Heidi. I like the solitude in this poem because I tend to be a loner. The end is great-giving dues to the Creator Heidi Sands January 12, 2025 at 9:06 AM Thank you Oliver. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Gershon Wolf January 11, 2025 at 9:25 PM That first line is so resonant and redolent of serenity and peace, setting the tone for a majestic write. I am faving this one, Heidi. Thanks for sharing. :) Gershon Heidi Sands January 12, 2025 at 5:04 AM Thank you so much Gershon. I am happy tp see your comment and I appreciate the Fave too. I hope you have a nice day :)

JC Brul January 11, 2025 at 7:32 AM I love the quiet park with the moon watching. I can vividly imagine serenity. Thank you Heidi for sharing this beautiful creation. Stay creative.^___^ JCB Heidi Sands January 11, 2025 at 7:42 AM Thank you very much JCB . It was a beautiful sight. I appreciate your support. Have a nice day :)

Ink Empress January 11, 2025 at 7:09 AM So descriptive and beautiful, love so many lines in this especially how youv written " The skies were friendly, where the moon shared its space Along with the star, smiles glowed from its shining face" such sublime rhymes and exquisite imagery and metaphors so well delivered dear heidi! Pleasure reading this gem! Hope 2025 treats you well: sending you light always Heidi Sands January 11, 2025 at 7:16 AM Thank you for your visit and very kind comment. I hope 2025 is a great year for you. Best wishes ! :)