Observe

Observe

When you think you have beauty in your life and it is taken
When you think a world is born of your own minds eye creation
When lies are the commonest words spoken without deprecation
When the dark nights become your only truest salvation
When you believe in two hearts becoming one in loves manifestation
When I lie on a beach and hear the waves of the ocean in total concentration
When I see the tropical birds in many colours on a tree in congregation 
When you walk with your thoughts and realise that living is just an observation
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Thajudeen Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 11:26 PM
On observation a good poem.
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