Observations on Dreams

    Dreams of troubled people are troubled
       Those of calm people are calm

    Intensity of both types often doubled
       ~ There is no magic balm
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Legros Kelley Avatar
December 28, 2024 at 2:24 PM
This world is so full of nightmares in broad daylight that can trouble even the calmest dreamers it seems to me...but happily, the stories not yet over. Calming soon the nightmares and troubles a thing of the past. I can hardly wait. Hope comes in the dawn.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 2:41 PM
Interesting…hmm. Pretty much
Tor Avatar
December 26, 2024 at 9:09 PM
Clever write Gershon. If only the Troubled dreams can be controlled and eliminated. This Rhyme took me to thinking of people that have troubled minds. My brother sent me a video of a woman in a subway in Brooklyn that was set on fire by a Lunatic from Guatemala that was once deported. It was the most horrific crime on an individual anyone could ever commit. People stood there doing nothing, and in the video you can see a transit cop walking by and idiots instead of helping her were filming her.
Tor Avatar
December 26, 2024 at 9:12 PM
What's this world come to? I wish I would have been there to help this poor lady. Broke my heart watching this daughter, sister, someones aunt, mother suffer and die the way she did. I have a feeling this guy when convicted will not last very long in prison... Thanks for sharing my friend...
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