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Observation

Sitting observing the Stars and Stripes Gently wave from its high perch Storm clouds are passing over Will the storm pass today but come tomorrow

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John Freeman

Date: 10/2/2009 5:28:00 PM

I thoroughly believe as the bible has predicted, the storm will eventually have it's case settled.Our economy as we know it will fall, as a Godly one will replace it. Sincerely Moses

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/2/2009 4:10:00 PM

nicely written, good job, thanks for your comments.

P Sheart

Date: 10/2/2009 3:23:00 PM

Hi Sara Love this. I read so many different meaning into this but the main one you mean I fully get. I sent you soup mail okay. A hug hun. Your comment meant a lot to me. Keeping you in my prayers.Hey, if you get a chance read my latest one called The perfect storm. I think you will like it. This is a excellent poem. Love Light Truth Patty