Obscurity

Drench me in the hues of ocean.
The sky in my bosom quivers
while the dark clouds shadow the birds. 
Lost in  eternal darkness
heart ripped off by this separation
Insanity mollifies  the baffled mind.
Devoured by bleakness
the soul rejoices in complacency.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Blauw Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 8:11 AM
Congratulations on making the first round. Good luck.
Brown Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 10:08 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Bishnu. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
Kopp Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 11:30 AM
I don't know how I missed this...wow going to favs
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