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Obscurity

Opaque figure in mist Observed as cryptic form Overtly shrouded vague Owned nearness lost, wanders Onward to enigma Obscurity fogs mind Obsessed yearning fades out. April 6, 2021 Syllable count : 6 per line Checked on howmanysyllables.com Contest : Pleiades O Sponsor : Kim Merryman

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Date: 4/9/2021 2:57:00 PM
Congrats on this creative winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 4/7/2021 1:44:00 PM
Subimal, a great portrayal of obscurity! Congrats on your 2nd place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/6/2021 10:18:00 PM
Great write, Subimal , congratulations on your Pleiades win. Eve
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