Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Verse

Obscurity

Opaque figure in mist
Observed as cryptic form
Overtly shrouded vague 
Owned nearness lost, wanders
Onward to enigma
Obscurity fogs mind
Obsessed yearning fades out.

April 6, 2021
Syllable count : 6 per line
Checked on howmanysyllables.com
Contest : Pleiades O
Sponsor : Kim Merryman

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Sara Kendrick April 9, 2021 at 2:57 PM Congrats on this creative winner. Way to go. Sara

Kim Merryman April 7, 2021 at 1:44 PM Subimal, a great portrayal of obscurity! Congrats on your 2nd place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Eve Roper April 6, 2021 at 10:18 PM Great write, Subimal , congratulations on your Pleiades win. Eve