OBLIVIOUS OF ME
I saw her walking by the sea,
Her long hair blowing in the breeze.
Tall and so elegant was she.
I saw her walking by the sea;
She was oblivious of me,
Saw her, elegant, walking, oblivious
The first five lanes are from my poem "By The Sea" written 2024
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