Oblivion's Obituary Mty Premiere Contest Winner

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…the greatest poet who ever lived …our Lord Jesus Christ Wishes that wash upon the shallow shore, Lacrimal lesions of the holographic whore… Tectonic temptations, the lava shall pour, Unleashing emotions, entombed we gore. Mangled monuments of ruins regurgitate, Surfacing megalomania of demons dominate… Demonic destruction encroaches to infiltrate, Demigods of desire will position to penetrate. Distant horizons dissipating within plain sight, Frigid frustrations amidst fore playing frostbite… Detestation distortions of Hell’s agape appetite, Antagonizing warring Angels take feverous flight. Falling into oblivion within the blink of an eye, Idempotent illusions making macabre to justify… But there stands one soul, whose words do magnify, Their love spreading thru asphyxiating air to clarify. ...background music by 'The Metal Heroes' A tool tribute band... copy of 'Sinkfist' Using a male virtual voiceover June.24.2019 More To Me Poetry Sponsored by: William Kekaula Placed 1'st... Premiere Contest... Thank You

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Date: 5/21/2020 5:10:00 PM
Hello Winged Wiaiororr, I can just hear the music the angels playing.It is music to my hears. Enjoy your eening my friend.
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Date: 7/18/2019 4:57:00 PM
Congratulations indeed Well done
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Date: 6/28/2019 1:08:00 AM
Wow what an awesome winning poem. Big congrats to you.
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Date: 6/27/2019 2:22:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, WW. Superbly penned.
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Date: 6/27/2019 11:08:00 AM
Amazing use of verbalism manifesting an effective phrasing, great imagery and an awesome breezing of a wonderful adaptation, my heartfelt thanks for your entry to my sponsored contest and indeed, my compliments to yours being 1st Place, Aloha ~ William
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Date: 6/25/2019 8:40:00 PM
Amazing write, WW. I stand here, slack-jawed. Incredible. :) gw
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Date: 6/25/2019 9:24:00 AM
A very deep write ^WW^which needs one to be focused and completely present in concentration - Your poems of faith leave me spellbound. Hugs and blessings Jen.
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Date: 6/25/2019 5:29:00 AM
I need a dictionary every time I read your poetry, WW. After I am done looking up some of the words I realize that your poems are greater than the greatness I thought they were..lol You are a wizard of words my friend. Love & Peace my winged friend. ~Charlie
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Date: 6/24/2019 8:53:00 AM
Tremendous piece. You put a lot of soul into this one. I would recommend keeping the one you have lol! Thanks for your visit and clever comment.
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Date: 6/24/2019 1:17:00 AM
Greetings, you artistic soul! Your poetic gift surpasses the magnicent. Words do fail me. The video is perfect, as is the music... Indeed....He was the greatest poet. This is a FAV for me. I will be reading many times. Blessings from~ Panagiota
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