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Oblivion

Remember me
as colours fade away and brooks dry away and nature cry the day
 
Remember me
if your eyes ever cried or hands ever shook or body ever shivered
 
Remember me
if the day turned night and there was no light to make the shadow appear
 
Remember me
for all the long days we spent far away and burned notes of lovers steam
 
Remember me
if you ever got lost and nothing lead the path but a spectrum of my past
 
Remember me
when the room split in half's and curtains roll around and gohsts come around
 
Remember me
if the clock struk once and the time was done like nothing ever begun
 
Remember me
if my life fade away, and no one decided to stay on my grave with respect to pay
 
Remember me
if my word ever knocked the doors of your house and sneaked through the window to find nothing alike!!?
 
Remember me
if time ever stopped and my soul was dropped before you as a broken glass
 
Remember me
when the weather gets cold, when the sun never rise and it rains so hard
 
Remember me
if you felt what I felt and drowned with regreat for a life apart spent
 
Remember me
as an angel of night who failed to protect your heart from the judgement of a crule knight

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Date: 10/14/2024 7:39:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/18/2016 11:14:00 AM
ALI, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/5/2015 7:42:00 PM
Ali A, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 8/4/2015 2:03:00 PM
Hi Ali,could you please explain the poem to me?? chose it for a assignment but i don't fully understand it
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Ali Adhab
Date: 8/5/2015 7:48:00 PM
Sure thing, it'd b my pleasure
Date: 6/26/2015 3:02:00 AM
I like the repetition. A deep write. I enjoyed.
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Ali Adhab
Date: 6/26/2015 3:03:00 AM
Thank you,, I hope you enjoyed reading it

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