OBLIVION

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'0n sudden moments forgotten happenstances flash overcoming oblivion' - Poet

01/06/2024

Oadis, Oblivion, Odyssey Poetry

Contest by Constance La France

OBLIVION Ongoing oblivion ! Not remembering when you came close ! Piercing heart pearly passion arose. That wonderful sensation. Ongoing oblivion ! Then my young heart was a blooming bud Colourful youth displaying cards. Couldn’t take hurried decision. Ongoing oblivion ! On first meet your glance glowed in glory. But my response wasn’t compulsory. Gone for other attraction. Ongoing oblivion ! Didn't care ! Someone somewhere was waiting. Yet dormant desires drifted, sweating as nostalgia not gone. Ongoing oblivion ! In my last phase I just reminisced : Your drowsy dreamy eyes mesmerised. Sudden realisation.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/15/2024 6:09:00 AM

- Great written, Anisha :) - hugs

Martin Braun

Date: 1/6/2024 6:56:00 AM

"Gone for other attraction" I read this a number of times... and was delighted with the thoughts it provoked. Thank you