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'0n sudden moments forgotten happenstances flash overcoming oblivion'  - Poet

01/06/2024

Oadis, Oblivion, Odyssey Poetry

Contest by Constance La France

OBLIVION


           OBLIVION

         
           Ongoing oblivion !
           Not remembering when you came close !
           Piercing heart pearly passion arose.
           That wonderful sensation.
          
           Ongoing oblivion !
           Then my young heart was a blooming bud
           Colourful youth displaying cards.
           Couldn’t take hurried decision.

           Ongoing oblivion !
           On first meet your glance glowed in glory.
           But my response wasn’t compulsory.
           Gone for other attraction.

            Ongoing oblivion !
            Didn't care ! Someone somewhere was waiting.
            Yet dormant desires drifted, sweating
            as nostalgia not gone.
             
            Ongoing oblivion !
            In my last phase I just reminisced :
            Your drowsy dreamy eyes mesmerised.
            Sudden realisation.
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Andresen Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 6:09 AM
- Great written, Anisha :) - hugs
Braun Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 6:56 AM
"Gone for other attraction" I read this a number of times... and was delighted with the thoughts it provoked. Thank you
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