'0n sudden moments forgotten happenstances flash overcoming oblivion' - Poet
01/06/2024
Oadis, Oblivion, Odyssey Poetry
Contest by Constance La France
OBLIVION Ongoing oblivion ! Not remembering when you came close ! Piercing heart pearly passion arose. That wonderful sensation. Ongoing oblivion ! Then my young heart was a blooming bud Colourful youth displaying cards. Couldn’t take hurried decision. Ongoing oblivion ! On first meet your glance glowed in glory. But my response wasn’t compulsory. Gone for other attraction. Ongoing oblivion ! Didn't care ! Someone somewhere was waiting. Yet dormant desires drifted, sweating as nostalgia not gone. Ongoing oblivion ! In my last phase I just reminisced : Your drowsy dreamy eyes mesmerised. Sudden realisation.
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