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Objects In the Mirror - Reflections of a Florette

like the objects in the mirror
did you only appear nearer
now broken and seven years cursed
 i feel foolish my heart coerced
and still nothing about us is any clearer





MAURICE YVONNE
SEPTEMBER 4 2014

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Andrea Dietrich

February 3, 2015 at 6:29 PM

Love your comment to me that you left on my reply here a few months back! thanks for seeing my poems today. You are a wonderful friend forever! sorry I am rushing today. Too much poetry to catch up on but I am doing my best and just wanted to tell you hello for today.

Regina Mcintosh

September 5, 2014 at 11:00 PM

This is a great poem for the contest. I wish you all the best and appreciate all your kind words and gestures. God bless you and happy writing. With love and prayers, Gina

Maurice Yvonne

September 5, 2014 at 11:14 PM

thank you. God bless you.

Poet Destroyer A

September 5, 2014 at 11:59 AM

Hello Maurice, I was not much on line, yesterday... However, I had this poem on hold... LOL... On my browser, ready to read today. :) By the way, WOW, you might not be looking in to the right mirror. Look closer and you will see, for I believe a mirror, reveals all. I know this is deep, however it holds a lost feeling, I can relate too... Love Linda, your newest fan. ((by the way you are my newest favorite poet, as of yesterday. :))

Maurice Yvonne

September 5, 2014 at 12:28 PM

Where have you been hiding all my life. Never mind if you told me you would have to find a new spot.

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 5, 2014 at 10:30 AM

Nice take on a mirror Maurice. Good luck.

Maurice Yvonne

September 5, 2014 at 12:31 PM

thank you Brenda.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

September 5, 2014 at 1:58 AM

Ah ha that's awesome Maurice! Great work! Gl in contest!

Maurice Yvonne

September 5, 2014 at 3:32 PM

thank you Dr. for your very kind words.

Andrea Dietrich

September 4, 2014 at 8:18 PM

this is another really good one. Well thought out! I love its message.

Maurice Yvonne

September 5, 2014 at 12:37 PM

oh how you make me blush.

Charmaine Chircop

September 4, 2014 at 2:57 PM

Ow that glass mirrir..not any clearer..Ow to keep believing in a reflection of warmth and embrace.Sometimes We just need to change the mirror ,and new images might remove the curse.I love the way your mind and heart entwined to perform such a powerful write.Adding it tfs.

Maurice Yvonne

September 4, 2014 at 3:04 PM

i can't thank you enough for your kindness and support. lots of love.

Charmaine Chircop

September 4, 2014 at 2:58 PM

Mirror..Oops typo

Maurice Yvonne

September 4, 2014 at 1:30 PM

Hey Tim, Jan, hello. I didn't know you two were in here playing. Had I known you were coming I would of baked a cake. Also you both get that thought out of my mind...I mean get that thought out of your mind I spelled it"coming" not what you both thought when you read it.

Jan Allison

September 4, 2014 at 3:53 PM

I'll make the cake , ginger, lemon, orange and cranberry or courgette or my choc almond brownies mmmmm:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

September 4, 2014 at 1:43 PM

I could go for some cake...maybe some pie would work too

Jan Allison

September 4, 2014 at 1:39 PM

BEHAVE!LOL :-)hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison

September 4, 2014 at 12:01 PM

very deep Maurice. good luck with the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

September 4, 2014 at 1:31 PM

Jan read above you.

Jan Allison

September 4, 2014 at 1:20 PM

*** blushes*** thank Tim you are wonderful my friend:-) hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith

September 4, 2014 at 1:13 PM

No curses for you Jan.,.you are diamond shining amongst the coal...hugs Tim

Maurice Yvonne

September 4, 2014 at 12:33 PM

Thank you.

Tim Smith

September 4, 2014 at 11:43 AM

Very deep and so true my friend....I have 3 years to go on my curse.....Tim....if you get a chance check out the collaboration of mine with Cas under CT Duet....love never sleeps

Maurice Yvonne

September 4, 2014 at 1:32 PM

Tim stop making Jan blush. What am I going to do with you two kids.

Jan Allison

September 4, 2014 at 12:35 PM

No hope for me then Tim I look in the mirror and am cursed LOL:-) hugs Jan xxxx

Maurice Yvonne

September 4, 2014 at 11:49 AM

for sure i will Tim.