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Obituary

Dusk to dawn and dawn to dusk Turns carbon chassis into withered husk Faded breaths fade from memory Must this be our destiny? Time may yet erode the flesh and bone But lifeless words lives on in slabs of stone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 1/2/2025 8:01:00 PM
Nice (grim) poem!
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 1/7/2025 8:09:00 PM
Well, this is my 13th poem, so I thought something grim would be the most appropriate subject matter ;) Thanks!
Date: 12/30/2024 7:01:00 PM
Congrats on a fine poem. p.s. only one R in 'obituary'.
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 1/1/2025 12:51:00 AM
Whoops. It's fixed, thanks.

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