Obedience of 10

I would like to thank you for your visit.
I have removed these poems for a distant future book publication.
I believe we poets, can make a difference
in this world. We live in the 21st century,
we have tools( technology), we have our past,  and imagination.
We just don't have the courage, because
I guess most are afraid to fail, to loose money.
All I have to say is we can't take money with us,
when we die. I also say hasn't mankind failed enough,
and isn't mankind worth the effort, our children is worth the effort..

Thank you, and my your God Bless you

John E WordSlinger
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bingham Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 2:14 PM
John I like number three the best, so much truth in your words. God Bless. Ron
Adeite Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 10:53 AM
nice use of rhymes, creative piece. this is lovely.... this piece is awesome! … keep your passionate pen walking and working on your poetry pad. Great you!
Christian Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 10:50 AM
Amen my friend a splendid write this is so uplifting and inspiring, a powerful message for us all, God bless you from diane
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