Oath

when she crossed my path, 
l took a sure oath, 
that she will have a residence in my heart.


by Luckson Mupakamiso
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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August 29, 2017 at 7:33 AM
Luckson, I liked this poem very much.complete , event and resolve. Similar to Haiku. Terry. Thank for your comment on winds return
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November 28, 2018 at 11:37 AM
Thanks Terry for the advise.... you are star... you are an inspiration
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