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Oasis At Heart of City

There is a …
                      A tranquil sanctuary at the heart of a busy city…
                 Not many colourful flowers, but shady trees, and lush
                                              green bushes, 
            A serene pond with emerald water quivering with rustling breeze,
                      Rocks of different sizes and shapes scattered around - 
                      one reminds me of lying Buddha, peaceful and calm, 
           another -  Buddha in meditation - folding his legs in a lotus posture. 

                          There are a few stone-benches around the pond .. 
                             for lazy folks like me! who savour watching! 
                       ducks and turtles are only water-creatures I could see, 
                                  some fishes…circling around carefree,

                          Wish a scintillating mermaid from a magical world 
                       would appear from the bottom of the turquoise water,  
                                          to spread her charm around…
            
              Sun shining in crystal water …scattering rays in the rippled mirror ....

A Duck sits placidly on a rock alone… as if she wants to bask in the whispering glow of sun! 


                       A Brian Strand " You Choose" Poetry Contest
                                            FIRST  PLACE
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Kauffman Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 11:05 AM
Magical, whimsical and utterly charming! Your mermaid is a delightful surprise appearing right out of your wonderful imagination. Just made me :D in the midst of this serenity. So many wonderful phrases and serene pictures - "quivering" waters. Sending you serene blessings, a hug and much love dear friend! Thank you for sharing your special place!
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 10:42 AM
Hello Mala ,I felt like I have been in the park with you as I read this poem. Love & Friendship Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 11:38 AM
Helo mala my friend. I would enjoy it with you to Mala. Yes we both love to watch nature. Love & Friendship. Darlene.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 6:17 AM
Dear Darlene, this is such a serene place. I would love to be here with you! We both love watching nature. Love ~ Mala
Cunningham Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 10:10 AM
A tranquil place Mala to escape the hustle and bustle of the city. Tom
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 10:26 AM
True, Tom - very tranquil place. It’s a Japanese-themed park, named after a city in Japan. So cool - as if I am visiting Japan!
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