Oasis

Incandescent emotion Spills and Tumbles from pen to page Iridescent love Leaps gracefully Like a gazelle from the Lion's claws, as the safest Oasis rises into View. Expectation of inspiration Eradicates those dark emotions Vividly transforming Every Rhyme. Yet, The world of things Haunts the proposed Innocence of these words. No Guilt Will Eclipse the bright Sunshine of some of the Happiest refreshing moments. Alone with my thoughts, but still Raptured and ever grateful for Every beautiful spirit-filled Drink to dissolve the driest darkness CV 3rd December 2023

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Ink Empress

Date: 12/14/2023 6:55:00 AM

I am in awe of your seamless alliterations, wordplay, and the flow of this very heartfelt poem that conveys so much in such eloquence, i think many can resonate. And how creative it is for you to describe ink spill, thats just clever and artistic and so vivid. Pleasure coming across this brilliant work of art. Definitely a fave for me, sending you light always

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/3/2023 12:17:00 PM

A very transcendental reading on the final victory of creativity. I enjoyed the hopefulness of this one.

Cynthia Vipond
Date: 12/3/2023 1:24:00 PM

Thank you Hilda dear :) Very best Cindy x