Paul Callus Poet Verse

Oasis

[A Pleiades consists of 7 lines, each having 6 syllables.
The title consists of ONE word only (and that word will NOT 
be used again in the poem itself). The first word in each line
begins with the same letter as the title.]


Obsessed by jealousy 
Overwhelmed to the point
Of no return, I reach
Out to you for comfort
Ousting repulsive thoughts
Opting to replenish
Our parched and arid love.

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Pleiades “O” Contest
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
        Placed 5th

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Brandy Nicole May 11, 2021 at 11:31 AM *Jealousy* is One ugly trait. Those that present themselves in this way, do so, mostly due to low self esteem. There are so many reasons to be thankful, so many qualities within to appreciate about yourself. Many fail to see the truth. So sad indeed. You have expressed this emotion so beautifully my sweet friend. My heart is touched by your words. Hugs, Brandy Paul Callus May 20, 2021 at 11:46 AM I cherish your pleasant, complimentary and insightful feedback, Brandy Nicole....thank you! Your visit brings warmth to my page:) Regards & Hugs // paul

Ann Foster May 11, 2021 at 6:53 AM Great fun. Excellent write. Ann Paul Callus May 20, 2021 at 11:42 AM Glad you enjoyed it, Ann...thank you ... and pls excuse the late reply (not receiving any notifications has put me off my stride). Regards // paul

Judy Ball May 6, 2021 at 12:41 PM Nicely done Paul. Trouble is some people obsessed with jealousy will turn on the one they are in love with instead of the one they are jealous of. Jealousy hurts all parties. Great job here. God Bless, JB Paul Callus May 6, 2021 at 12:53 PM Thank you, Judy. Your insightful comments are appreciated. Blessings // paul

John Fleming May 1, 2021 at 10:41 AM Don't have much time for poetry at the moment...much to my detriment. When I do have a spare few hours though, I like to revisit as many dignitaries as I can...hence my stopping by here. Hope I am finding you in good health, Paul. My very best regards as always! :) john Paul Callus May 2, 2021 at 2:34 PM I am honoured to have you stopping by, John. I have just read your dedication to Connie; you have certainly made her day. ~ So far am keeping well, thank you; hope you are, too. Best regards // paul

Quoth Theraven April 30, 2021 at 8:10 AM Paul, Oasis, a word never to be used, perhaps never dealt. The Pleiades series seem to bring out the best in a poet's heart. -Richard Quoth Theraven May 5, 2021 at 8:31 AM No better use of three syllables in a single word's message. -R Paul Callus May 2, 2021 at 2:56 PM Thank you, Richard. Incidentally, the word "oasis" has inspired me several times! Best regards // paul

Malabika Ray Choudhury April 28, 2021 at 2:04 PM Dear Paul, Enjoyed this Pleides, which is beautifully written. Congratulations on your win. As you always do, chose a very interesting topic and a title, "Oasis". BW ~ Mala Paul Callus May 2, 2021 at 2:58 PM Your sincere comments/feedback are truly appreciated, Mala...thank you. ~ Best regards // paul

Funom Makama April 27, 2021 at 8:07 PM A big big big congratulations on your win. It is well deserved. Paul Callus April 28, 2021 at 5:28 AM Thank you, Funom. Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong April 27, 2021 at 8:07 PM I like this a lot Paul. Congratulations on your win! I am having fun catching up on poetry. Blessings xxoo Paul Callus April 28, 2021 at 5:19 AM Thank you, Connie. So lovely to see you and your muse having fun together:) Regards & Blessings // paul

Kenisha Shines April 22, 2021 at 10:32 PM Congratulations on your win!Loved your poem.Have a great day! Paul Callus April 27, 2021 at 1:23 AM Thank you Kenisha. May you too have a lovely and productive day. :) // paul

Jennifer Proxenos April 21, 2021 at 10:10 AM Congrats on a fine win my friend. You mentioned below that you like double visits, so I thought I'd do the same! Jennifer. Paul Callus April 27, 2021 at 1:21 AM So now it's my turn to say a double thank you Jenny :) You're always welcome in my humble abode :) Yes, replenishing arid love might not always work, but it's worth a try! Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Jennifer Proxenos April 21, 2021 at 10:09 AM Hi Paul, Obsessed with jealousy - opting to replenish an arid love - sometimes it does work but many a time the jealousy has too tight a hold on one. Warm regards, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick April 11, 2021 at 2:27 PM Whoa!! Reads like a lot of emotion going here. I hope it works out. Way to go with this winner. Congrats. Sara Paul Callus April 12, 2021 at 3:26 PM Thank you so much, Sara. Your visit is most welcome. Best regards // paul

Angela Crabtree April 9, 2021 at 5:47 PM Beautifully written, Paul. Saved to my favorites :) Paul Callus April 11, 2021 at 12:53 AM Many thanks Angela; both the lovely compliment and the fav are truly appreciated. ~ Regards // paul

Jack Horne April 9, 2021 at 12:16 PM I love this clever write, my friend - will have to try this form. I hope you are well Paul Callus April 11, 2021 at 1:03 AM Thank you, Jack. Hope you're keeping well and active. Regards // paul

Susan Ashley April 8, 2021 at 10:48 AM Dear Paul, I love the title and the metaphorical beauty that flows from it. Sometimes a watering of jealousy is just what the garden of love needs to become a lush oasis once again. I admire your polished poetic potency, my inspiring friend. Congratulations for your wonderful win. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan Paul Callus April 11, 2021 at 4:56 AM Thank you, dear Susan. Your lovely, insightful feedback is most welcome and worthy to be cherished. ~ Warm regards & hugs // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu April 8, 2021 at 10:43 AM Hello Paul, would I put this type of poem in a Verse form? or would it be in another form? I hope you had a nice Easter. regards Darlene. Thank you. Paul Callus April 10, 2021 at 7:35 AM Yes, Darlene..."Verse" should be fine Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich April 7, 2021 at 3:13 PM I really liked your metaphorical approach with Oasis, Paul. Back with my congrats. Paul Callus April 11, 2021 at 1:41 AM Thank you, Andrea; you know I appreciate double visits :) Regards // paul

Kim Merryman April 7, 2021 at 2:20 PM Paul, congrats on your win in my contest with your emotive pleiades! Blessings, Kim M Paul Callus April 11, 2021 at 1:36 AM Thank you, Kim. This form is fun to do:) Regards & blessings // paul

Paula Goldsmith April 7, 2021 at 7:44 AM Congratulations on your win. Love your oasis write. Have a blessed day............ Paul Callus April 11, 2021 at 1:35 AM Thank you, Paula. Hope you're enjoying the weekend. Regards // paul

Eve Roper April 6, 2021 at 10:33 PM Back with congratulations on your Pleiades win. Eve Paul Callus April 11, 2021 at 1:25 AM Thank you, Eve. I did not know the results were out! ~ Regards & Hugs // paul

Alexis Y. April 6, 2021 at 9:51 PM Hi Paul, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis Paul Callus April 11, 2021 at 1:24 AM Thank you, Alexis. Hope you're having a nice weekend. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich April 6, 2021 at 3:42 PM I really like how well you wrote on your chosen title, Paul. Deep! Paul Callus April 11, 2021 at 1:05 AM Thank you, Andrea. I've not had much time to write lately. Hope you're keeping well, my friend. // paul

Gordon Mcconnell April 6, 2021 at 1:47 PM Great pen Paul, really enjoyed this one, so expertly written. Hope all is well with you, blessings, Gordon Paul Callus April 6, 2021 at 3:06 PM Thank you for the generous comments, Gordon....most welcome :) Regards & blessings // paul

Silent One April 6, 2021 at 1:41 PM I love your take on this.. Paul Callus April 6, 2021 at 2:54 PM Thank you S_1; good to see you around again. Regards // paul

Regina Mcintosh April 6, 2021 at 2:31 AM This is wonderful writing. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina Paul Callus April 6, 2021 at 2:53 PM Glad you enjoyed it, Gina. Thank you. Regards & Blessings // paul

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