Oars Lift

oars lift
pieces of moon
dripping in the pond
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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August 21, 2013 at 2:08 PM
love the force you lift through the imagery... SKAT
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August 21, 2013 at 5:08 PM
LOL, SKAT-- you are giving me so big a head I will need to enter the house through the garage doors LOL. On a moonlit night with a slight breeze to quell the hot afternoon heat, as one oars out onto the lake to escape the stifling night, the light breeze lifts the drops of water and catching the moonlight the gems splatter like the milkyway swirling the pond water. Bob
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