Oaks

Overhearing her shriek
At the trees, he 
Keeps gardening, whispering
Soothing sounds to the soil


for andrea's acrostic contest
8/27/13

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Robert Johnson

March 11, 2014 at 9:39 PM

Like the Ostrich with it's head in the sand. Says so much about humans. No judgement, just that we're all human. Peace. :)

Ralph Mason

November 19, 2013 at 7:53 AM

Your poems are great. Looking forward to reading more. warm thought, Ralph

Dinda Minardi

November 15, 2013 at 6:41 AM

wow.. it is indeed a soothing poem, Susan

Kiran Bantawa

September 16, 2013 at 9:00 AM

congrats to you!

Poet Destroyer A

September 5, 2013 at 3:59 PM

awesome win..PD

Sara Kendrick

September 5, 2013 at 3:32 PM

Very interesting work..It has some drama iinvolved..Congrats on your great win..Sara

Donna Jones

September 1, 2013 at 2:51 PM

Congratulations on this awesome win

Skat A

September 1, 2013 at 2:03 PM

B E Susan, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT

Kim Merryman

September 1, 2013 at 1:59 PM

Susan, congrats on your win with this wonderful acrostic! Love, Kim

Sandra Adams

August 31, 2013 at 8:25 PM

congrats on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich

August 31, 2013 at 5:51 PM

AHA, so this is what you entered. I did not realize it was yours when you told me you did yours on a situation. I was thinking of a different one on the list. But this one did better!! I really like the last two lines. they are so awesome, but I was not sure what the first two lines meant. Let me know, will you? It makes me really curious. Congrats to you.