Oak Cast Long Shadow

. Oak cast long shadow Brown Thrasher, Northern Flicker... Feed at his big feet

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Cherie Durbin

Date: 3/24/2011 8:01:00 AM

Yes, I can see the birds in the mighty shadow, pecking for worms for their young!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/12/2011 9:09:00 PM

ENJOYED YOUR HAIKU,,SARA.. LOVE THE IMEAGERY... HAVE A BLESSED ONE,..P.D.

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/12/2011 9:02:00 PM

A lovely image Sara ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2011 4:24:00 PM

This is darling, Sara!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/12/2011 10:44:00 AM

That's quite a lovely image of birds feeding at the foot of the oak tree, Sara. Excellent haiku! Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 3/12/2011 7:05:00 AM

Well done on your win : ) Jack

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/12/2011 6:27:00 AM

Very well written and an image that reflects so nicely in your words.. wonderful Sara...luv Michael