O, Why'D You Leave

Was it something I said inadvertently
Did my eyes reveal uncertainty
O, why'd you leave

Was my rapt listening inattentive
Or passion's kisses uninventive
O, how I grieve  

Alcohol, not once did I abuse
Or narcotics ever use
O, the sighs I've heaved

To the kids, I was devoted
On your mother, I always doted
O, please believe...

That now I'll never be the same
That I'll forever myself blame
~ To your memory, I will cleave
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Godwin Avatar
August 28, 2019 at 10:49 PM
Boy, each of your poems I've clicked on this morning have mirrored romance as joy adorned or heart torn (I think). I relate to this as well, though I'll admit it is as the leaver - that hurts, too. Very emotive, sure got me. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Sands Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 6:48 PM
I can really feel this poem Gershon. Well written ! Have a nice evening :)
Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 7:34 PM
Thanks for the nice feedback, Heidi! Happy Monday evening. :) gw
Green Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 5:24 PM
Really nicely expressed sadness and longing. Love the form. Beautifully executed.
Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 6:13 PM
Chris, it's always a privilege and a treat for me to read your comments. Thank you so much. Best always, Gershon
Barnette Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 4:56 PM
Gershon, this is very heartfelt. I love the rhyme style as well.
Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 6:19 PM
Thank you so much for the encouragement, Tameko. Much appreciated! Best wishes, Gershon
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