O' the Summer Breeze

O' the summer breeze
Cool and satisfying winds
A soothing whistle

O' the summer breeze
Now gone, for winter is here
O' the frosty winds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Loveless Avatar
September 23, 2009 at 10:32 AM
nice hakus. makes me think of the way the ground sparkles like dimonds right after a snow.
Bellefleur Avatar
November 6, 2008 at 8:04 PM
I like this one as I miss the summer already! I am originally from Kitchener - small world! I can see in some of your poems you do miss the Canadian winter - I lived in Florida for six years and missed ice skating and also the snow on pine trees..
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