O! My Wonder World

O! My wonder world
thanks thee for thy life
thanks thee for thy beauty
for thy companion and 
thy compassion, but
let me escape.
I neither want thy pain
nor thy pleasure
please let me move
into the world
where lies my soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Palli Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 5:51 AM
Welcome to Poetrysoup. You'll enjoy the site
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February 9, 2010 at 4:01 PM
Thank you for the kind comment on my poem. I hope you will be posting more poetry soon. Keep on writing! Have a good day. Karen
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February 9, 2010 at 7:00 AM
Great and impressive write. Welcome to soup. Sara
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February 6, 2010 at 4:53 PM
A lot for the reader to ponder in this concise poem. I like the ending. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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February 5, 2010 at 6:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. Sometimes the road to the soul is through the pain and joys we call life. Vince
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February 5, 2010 at 4:48 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all ... as this delight tonight... wonderful prose poetry.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
Shango Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 7:39 AM
To find the soul is to complete the cycle of our search ... and to locates us where others long to be. An enjoyable read. Welcome to poetry soup, the home of poets and friends, and I shall be honored to have you as more friend. Right on, my friend.
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February 5, 2010 at 6:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shruti. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Young Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 5:41 AM
i love this it's very well written
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February 5, 2010 at 5:40 AM
Sad and painful, you have captured these emotions very well. Welcome to poetry soup
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