Christuraj Alex Poet Triolet

O Lily

O lily blooming near my darling's tomb
Scent her with your immaculate white bloom
She's sleeping just like in her mother's womb
O lily blooming near my darling's tomb
She sought my love and care like a fresh flume
Yet, to her death brought an unending doom
O lily blooming near my darling's tomb
Scent her with your immaculate white bloom


29 June 2021

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Susan Ashley June 29, 2021 at 7:15 PM Dear Christuraj, your poignant pen spills with sad beauty, deeply touching beyond the heart. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Christuraj Alex June 29, 2021 at 8:03 PM Thank you very much.

Subimal Sinha-Roy June 29, 2021 at 9:41 AM Sadness expressed so poignantly in rhyme. Nice composition. Christuraj Alex June 29, 2021 at 8:04 PM Thank you very much.

Rama Balasubramanian June 29, 2021 at 2:35 AM Beautiful yet sad. Both emotions mingle perfectly in your poem. Great write. Have a wonderful day ahead Christuraj Alex June 29, 2021 at 3:41 AM Thank you very much.

Joanna Daniel June 29, 2021 at 1:58 AM A sadly touching poem, Christuraj:) Christuraj Alex June 29, 2021 at 3:41 AM Thank you very much.

Harry Horsman June 28, 2021 at 11:53 PM What an amazing poem, so sad yet lovely. Christuraj Alex June 29, 2021 at 3:41 AM Thank you very much.

Aniruddha Pathak June 28, 2021 at 10:19 PM Ah, what a lovely Triolet, some poetry does have its own perfume, this proves. Christuraj Alex June 29, 2021 at 3:42 AM Thank you very much.