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O Honey

“O Honey, the brute bear, straddles the box.”
The saxophonist stares. “Music unlocks

the stuffings out of the dread growling beast.
Bear’s tongue does round his lips. Am I his feast?”

Goldilocks laughs. Saxophonist funny
and a great storyteller. “Now the bunny!”

His daughter points gleefully at its tail.
Dad closes the box, locking both in jail.

“The animals stuff their ears with their paws.
waiting for the whale to open its jaws.

Lo! They hear the great musician and hope
that the conductor will throw them a rope.”

Golden curls bob, “You make no sense, you must
unlock the box before the waters rust!”

“Suddenly roars, a quake - the box growling,
bunny scratching…” Dad and his muse rolling.

7/28/2021
Brian Strand’s Couplet Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Merryman Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 9:56 AM
Very cute, Kim! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 2:17 PM
Thank you, Kim! :)
Buehler Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 8:42 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, with this charming entry. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 4:18 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Alex Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 4:27 AM
A beautifully created couplet. Congratulations on your win!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 4:18 PM
Thank you, Chrisruraj!
Buhagiar Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 11:25 PM
You are like a lovely butterfly, flitting from one image to another. Best for a win.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 3:31 AM
Thanks so much, Victor!
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