O' Heaven Hear My Cry

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*Image of Living Water by Pinterest. O' Heaven Hear My Cry The river struck nearby my ears, A Lightning hit excites my fears, Feeling blames worth; I am the one, Holy Ghost, forgive Father, Son, O' thunder's rain runs over me, Soaked to my bones, mentality, Shrinking holding as waters run, Holy Ghost, forgive Father, Son, I sensed myself fully immersed, My innards feel as a cloudburst, Bearing a shift-hitting homerun, Holy Ghost, forgive Father, Son, As tears drop freely, express I, Heart's living water, confess I, Water stain on my face well done, Holy Ghost, forgave Father, Son, 2022 August 08 - REVISED A KYRIELLE ABOUT WATER ~~Kim Rodrigues RZ & HMS 8 syllables per 16 lines

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