O' Dear Mother

She feels thirsty
when we need water,
She feels hungry 
when we need bread and butter,
She feels happy
when we fly to our goal,
She stays nice
when we pursue our soul ,
Tears come out her eye
when we are in threat,
O'dear Mother
you are really great.

Mountains broken into pieces
with her anger,
Clouds started raining 
with her pleasure,
Flowers blossomed in garden
with her chuckle,
storm started blowing
when she was in trouble,
Her blessing hand 
always sanctified our heart,
O'dear mother
you are really great.

She tied our soul
with a single thread,
She revealed the fact
how to earn our bread,
She preached very nice
how to wipe out mud,
Without her aegis
everything is odd,
I pray for her
for a good health,
O'dear mother
you are really great.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 5:36 PM
oh, i was going to ask what hud hud was. Thanks for the clarification. GREAT tribute poem, Manmath. A good mother is all that, and more!
A   Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 5:08 PM
Congratulations Manmath, a lovely poem ... with much love from your mother... a perfect 7. Linda
Kimathi Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 3:39 AM
A beautiful dedication to a mother indeed!!! Congrats Manmath, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
A. Sharma Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:43 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb write Manmath..
Parmale Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 1:16 PM
Moms are the best creatures in the world followed by the sons who appreciate their sacrifices.... Manmath heartfelt and lovely write once again
Callus Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 4:37 PM
Such a lovely tribute to your mother, and all other mothers, too, Manmath! If I remember rightly Hud-Hud was the cyclone that ravaged parts of India not so long ago. ~ Regards // paul
Bankson Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 2:42 AM
WOW!You have a new fan..My mother just passed away recently and you just made her smile..Thank you.Great write! Jai
A   Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 3:27 AM
Thank you for the wonderful reply... Manmath, I will take your advice... hugs... Linda
Villarosa Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 12:36 AM
There's a lot to be thankful for on the role played by our mother, your words just fit to describe the love and sacrifice of a mother. A lovely read this morning. (^_^) Noel.
Dalei Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Thank u for ur encouraging sentence.........
Rodgers Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 9:53 PM
A poignant tribute, well said
Dalei Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 9:07 AM
Thank u Dave...
Andresen Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 1:20 PM
- Nothing can be compared to a loving mother (my mother died five years ago, I think about her every day :) - A lovely poem, Manmath :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dalei Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 1:32 PM
Thanks Anne.....hugs
A   Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 9:14 AM
Manmath, WOW... This is one of my favorite from you. The garden, and warm feeling of O Dear mother was and has been a beautiful read. Love Linda
Dalei Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Dear Linda, Mother plays a very vital role in our life. So plz try to write poem on mother, if u like.Thanks a lot for ur encouraging sentence.............hugs
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