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O' Dear Mother

She feels thirsty when we need water, She feels hungry when we need bread and butter, She feels happy when we fly to our goal, She stays nice when we pursue our soul , Tears come out her eye when we are in threat, O'dear Mother you are really great. Mountains broken into pieces with her anger, Clouds started raining with her pleasure, Flowers blossomed in garden with her chuckle, storm started blowing when she was in trouble, Her blessing hand always sanctified our heart, O'dear mother you are really great. She tied our soul with a single thread, She revealed the fact how to earn our bread, She preached very nice how to wipe out mud, Without her aegis everything is odd, I pray for her for a good health, O'dear mother you are really great. -------------------------

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Date: 7/22/2016 5:36:00 PM
oh, i was going to ask what hud hud was. Thanks for the clarification. GREAT tribute poem, Manmath. A good mother is all that, and more!
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Date: 4/25/2016 5:08:00 PM
Congratulations Manmath, a lovely poem ... with much love from your mother... a perfect 7. Linda
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Date: 4/25/2016 3:39:00 AM
A beautiful dedication to a mother indeed!!! Congrats Manmath, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:43:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb write Manmath..
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Date: 4/21/2016 1:16:00 PM
Moms are the best creatures in the world followed by the sons who appreciate their sacrifices.... Manmath heartfelt and lovely write once again
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Date: 4/14/2016 4:37:00 PM
Such a lovely tribute to your mother, and all other mothers, too, Manmath! If I remember rightly Hud-Hud was the cyclone that ravaged parts of India not so long ago. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/8/2016 2:42:00 AM
WOW!You have a new fan..My mother just passed away recently and you just made her smile..Thank you.Great write! Jai
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Date: 4/3/2016 3:27:00 AM
Thank you for the wonderful reply... Manmath, I will take your advice... hugs... Linda
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Date: 4/3/2016 12:36:00 AM
There's a lot to be thankful for on the role played by our mother, your words just fit to describe the love and sacrifice of a mother. A lovely read this morning. (^_^) Noel.
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/3/2016 9:08:00 AM
Thank u for ur encouraging sentence.........
Date: 4/2/2016 9:53:00 PM
A poignant tribute, well said
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/3/2016 9:07:00 AM
Thank u Dave...
Date: 4/2/2016 1:20:00 PM
- Nothing can be compared to a loving mother (my mother died five years ago, I think about her every day :) - A lovely poem, Manmath :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/2/2016 1:32:00 PM
Thanks Anne.....hugs
Date: 4/2/2016 9:14:00 AM
Manmath, WOW... This is one of my favorite from you. The garden, and warm feeling of O Dear mother was and has been a beautiful read. Love Linda
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/2/2016 9:51:00 AM
Dear Linda, Mother plays a very vital role in our life. So plz try to write poem on mother, if u like.Thanks a lot for ur encouraging sentence.............hugs

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