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O' Dear Mother

She feels your thirst
when you need water,
She feels your hunger
when you need bread and butter,
She feels happy
when you reach your goal,
She stays nice
when you go with your soul ,
Tears come out her eye
when we are in threat,
O'dear Mother
you are really great.

Mountains broken into pieces
with her anger,
Clouds starts raining 
with her pleasure,
Flowers blossom in garden
with her chuckle,
storm starts blowing
when she was in trouble,
Her blessing hand 
always sanctify our heart,
O'dear mother
you are really great.

She tied our soul
with a single thread,
She reveals the fact
how to earn our bread,
She preached very nice
how to wipe out mud,
Without her aegis
everything is odd,
I pray for you
for a good health,
O'dear mother
you are really great.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/22/2016 5:36:00 PM
oh, i was going to ask what hud hud was. Thanks for the clarification. GREAT tribute poem, Manmath. A good mother is all that, and more!
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Date: 4/25/2016 5:08:00 PM
Congratulations Manmath, a lovely poem ... with much love from your mother... a perfect 7. Linda
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Date: 4/25/2016 3:39:00 AM
A beautiful dedication to a mother indeed!!! Congrats Manmath, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:43:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb write Manmath..
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Date: 4/21/2016 1:16:00 PM
Moms are the best creatures in the world followed by the sons who appreciate their sacrifices.... Manmath heartfelt and lovely write once again
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Date: 4/14/2016 4:37:00 PM
Such a lovely tribute to your mother, and all other mothers, too, Manmath! If I remember rightly Hud-Hud was the cyclone that ravaged parts of India not so long ago. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/8/2016 2:42:00 AM
WOW!You have a new fan..My mother just passed away recently and you just made her smile..Thank you.Great write! Jai
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Date: 4/3/2016 3:27:00 AM
Thank you for the wonderful reply... Manmath, I will take your advice... hugs... Linda
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Date: 4/3/2016 12:36:00 AM
There's a lot to be thankful for on the role played by our mother, your words just fit to describe the love and sacrifice of a mother. A lovely read this morning. (^_^) Noel.
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/3/2016 9:08:00 AM
Thank u for ur encouraging sentence.........
Date: 4/2/2016 9:53:00 PM
A poignant tribute, well said
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/3/2016 9:07:00 AM
Thank u Dave...
Date: 4/2/2016 1:20:00 PM
- Nothing can be compared to a loving mother (my mother died five years ago, I think about her every day :) - A lovely poem, Manmath :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/2/2016 1:32:00 PM
Thanks Anne.....hugs
Date: 4/2/2016 9:14:00 AM
Manmath, WOW... This is one of my favorite from you. The garden, and warm feeling of O Dear mother was and has been a beautiful read. Love Linda
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/2/2016 9:51:00 AM
Dear Linda, Mother plays a very vital role in our life. So plz try to write poem on mother, if u like.Thanks a lot for ur encouraging sentence.............hugs