Nurses

Need  some medical care?
 Nurses will care  for you
 Needles for injections
 Next the thermometer
 Need to check for fever
 Ninety eight point six?..good
 Now do you feel better?

4/29/17
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Imtiaz Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 11:37 PM
the feeling of needle is haunting
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 5:55 PM
Congrats here, Joseph . I am waiting for her O contest now. Can you guess which food I will do next? I already have it written!!
Andresen Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 12:18 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michaels Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 3:22 AM
Back again to offer congratulations on your win! Regards, John.
Merryman Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 6:16 PM
Great portrayal of nurses, Joseph! I like how you ended it. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
May Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 5:11 AM
Thank you so much for my placement Kim..hugs
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 9:45 PM
So sweet Joseph! My oldest daughter is a nurse. She became one through the Army. ; ) 7
Sands Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 9:18 AM
Very creative Joseph :)
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 1:26 PM
- Nurses are ...... very special ... huh ........ still bad .... when should I come ... - Down with the pants .... the thermometer is ready :) - Fun, Joseph - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Imtiaz Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 11:36 PM
yeah nurses are special because they care of you when you are unable to do......................
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 3:03 PM
I love how you used the N words for Nurses. Very nice, Joseph!
Michaels Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 11:02 AM
This is great, Joseph. Clever take on the theme!! Good luck in the contest! Regards, John.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 8:35 PM
Nurses are everyday heroes! GL in contest, Joseph!
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