Nurses

Need some medical care? Nurses will care for you Needles for injections Next the thermometer Need to check for fever Ninety eight point six?..good Now do you feel better? 4/29/17

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Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 11/21/2017 11:37:00 PM

the feeling of needle is haunting

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2017 5:55:00 PM

Congrats here, Joseph . I am waiting for her O contest now. Can you guess which food I will do next? I already have it written!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/13/2017 12:18:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels

Date: 5/13/2017 3:22:00 AM

Back again to offer congratulations on your win! Regards, John.

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/12/2017 6:16:00 PM

Great portrayal of nurses, Joseph! I like how you ended it. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Joseph May
Date: 5/13/2017 5:11:00 AM

Thank you so much for my placement Kim..hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/4/2017 9:45:00 PM

So sweet Joseph! My oldest daughter is a nurse. She became one through the Army. ; ) 7

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/3/2017 9:18:00 AM

Very creative Joseph :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/1/2017 1:26:00 PM

- Nurses are ...... very special ... huh ........ still bad .... when should I come ... - Down with the pants .... the thermometer is ready :) - Fun, Joseph - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 11/21/2017 11:36:00 PM

yeah nurses are special because they care of you when you are unable to do......................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2017 3:03:00 PM

I love how you used the N words for Nurses. Very nice, Joseph!

John Michaels

Date: 4/30/2017 11:02:00 AM

This is great, Joseph. Clever take on the theme!! Good luck in the contest! Regards, John.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/29/2017 8:35:00 PM

Nurses are everyday heroes! GL in contest, Joseph!